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大家觉得我写得怎样?
越南妇女节
很快就来越南妇女节了。我想给妈妈一个惊喜,就为她好好准备,给她组织一个难忘的妇女节。
首先,我把地板打扫得干干净净。平时都是妈妈做家务,这次让我来帮忙吧。我把很多彩带和彩色的气球挂起来。房子被我装饰的漂漂亮亮。
可是,我还没有准备好礼物。应该送给妈妈什么东西才好呢?我再三考虑,突然想起来,妈妈日常最喜欢鲜花,那就买给她一束吧。
想到这儿,我立即去超市买了一束水仙花和一个蛋糕。回家后,我把这些东西排在桌子上,然后慢慢等妈妈下班。
妈妈回家后,看到一切,觉得很感动。我就跟她说:“妈妈,你辛苦了。感谢你把我抚养长大。祝你妇女节快乐!”妈妈听完连把我紧紧拥抱。
这妇女节给我留下了深刻的印象,使我难忘。
大家觉得我写得怎样?
越南妇女节
很快就来越南妇女节了。我想给妈妈一个惊喜,就为她好好准备,给她组织一个难忘的妇女节。
首先,我把地板打扫得干干净净。平时都是妈妈做家务,这次让我来帮忙吧。我把很多彩带和彩色的气球挂起来。房子被我装饰的漂漂亮亮。
可是,我还没有准备好礼物。应该送给妈妈什么东西才好呢?我再三考虑,突然想起来,妈妈日常最喜欢鲜花,那就买给她一束吧。
想到这儿,我立即去超市买了一束水仙花和一个蛋糕。回家后,我把这些东西排在桌子上,然后慢慢等妈妈下班。
妈妈回家后,看到一切,觉得很感动。我就跟她说:“妈妈,你辛苦了。感谢你把我抚养长大。祝你妇女节快乐!”妈妈听完连把我紧紧拥抱。
这妇女节给我留下了深刻的印象,使我难忘。
越南妇女节
很快就来越南妇女节了。我想给妈妈一个惊喜,就为她好好准备,给她组织一个难忘的妇女节。
首先,我把地板打扫得干干净净。平时都是妈妈做家务,这次让我来帮忙吧。我把很多彩带和彩色的气球挂起来。房子被我装饰的漂漂亮亮。
可是,我还没有准备好礼物。应该送给妈妈什么东西才好呢?我再三考虑,突然想起来,妈妈日常最喜欢鲜花,那就买给她一束吧。
想到这儿,我立即去超市买了一束水仙花和一个蛋糕。回家后,我把这些东西排在桌子上,然后慢慢等妈妈下班。
妈妈回家后,看到一切,觉得很感动。我就跟她说:“妈妈,你辛苦了。感谢你把我抚养长大。祝你妇女节快乐!”妈妈听完连把我紧紧拥抱。
这妇女节给我留下了深刻的印象,使我难忘。
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越南的妇女节很快就要到了,我想给妈妈一个惊喜,提前为她做好准备,给她制造一个令人难忘的妇女节。
房子被我装饰的漂漂亮亮的。
妈妈听完后连忙把我紧紧的抱住。
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