今日、私は「残響のテロッル」というアニメのエンディングを訳したいと思います。初めの４つ文だけを訳したいのです。この投稿は自然かどうかも返信してくださいと、私の翻訳について返信してください。

私の訳された歌詞：

誰か海を撒いてはくれないか、僕の頭上に。
Won't someone pour the ocean over my head?

沈んでく魚と太陽、浴びたいのだ。
I want to bath in sinking fish and sunlight.

鮮やかな道、躓いて消える魔法。
A vivid road, magic that disappears when I stumble.

プレパラート越しに見える罅割れた空。
The cracked sky visible beyond the preparations Does this sound natural?

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