@maple88 thank you very much，your answer helped a lot ！can you please have a look at this one：（He has a warm heart to treat people well and has a gift to keep people around to achieve the same goal），I think its correct （not 100% sure）but poorly phrased？

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maple88

26 Dec 2016

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Pretty good, but there is room for a few changes:

He has a warm heart, treats people well and has a gift to mobilize and motivate people to work together towards the same goal.

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How do you say this in English (US)? please help with fix my grammatical errors：1，he has an exceptional passion for innovation, resulting in significantly increased productivity See a translation

I don't know if I would use "exceptional" to characterize "passion." A lot of passion, a huge passion.

Not really, it's correct, but maybe I'd rephrase it: He has a lot of passion for innovation, which helps to increase the productivity significantly. But that's just my style, no need to change.

Pretty good, but there is room for a few changes:He has a warm heart, treats people well and has a gift to mobilize and motivate people to work together towards the same goal.

How do you say this in English (US)? please help with fix my grammatical errors：1，he has an exceptional passion for innovation, resulting in significantly increased productivity

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Not really, it's correct, but maybe I'd rephrase it:

He has a lot of passion for innovation, which helps to increase the productivity significantly.

But that's just my style, no need to change.

Pretty good, but there is room for a few changes:

He has a warm heart, treats people well and has a gift to mobilize and motivate people to work together towards the same goal.