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I want native English speakers to correct my essay written in English !I really need your help !!!!!!

When I was 4 years old, I went to the hot spring with my family and was almost kidnapped. I was separated from them because I was curious and went here and there. When I found that I got lost, I called my mother many times. Then, a man talked to me, "What's wrong? Are you alone ? Do you want me to take you to your mother by my motorbike?" But we were in the building. So I thought it was strange to ride on the motorbike. So I just said "Never" clearly. That's why I'm still alive.
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