18 Dec 2019

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Please please 🙏🏼🙏🏼 help me to make the following paragraph sounds natural and formal:
From my own experience, the performance management that was applied in my work, has negative outcomes. The system was evaluating employees based on certain criteria that set by the head department. Also, managers have the the liability to evaluate their employees based on their own judgment. This however made employees unsatisfied as there are some great efforts were not taking in to the evaluation consideration. They felt that their efforts were ignored and the management focused just on challenging criteria to make it difficult for them to achieve the performance. This process created unsatisfied employees who were discouraged even to continue the good effort as it not nave been seen or acknowledged by the management.
Additionally, certain managers were biased and evaluated the employees based on the favorability.

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