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30 Dec 2019
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There is an annual event called 除夜の鐘 Joya no kane in Japan.
We ring big bells 108 times in temples on the last day of the year.
It's said that we have 108 polluting thoughts such as greed, hatred and etc and 108 times ringing bells could remove them.
These days, some people make complains that the sound of the bell is annoying.
It means the event is effective. The people probably are filled with the bad thoughts.
Does this sound natural?
There is an annual event called 除夜の鐘 Joya no kane in Japan.
We ring big bells 108 times in temples on the last day of the year.
It's said that we have 108 polluting thoughts such as greed, hatred and etc and 108 times ringing bells could remove them.
These days, some people make complains that the sound of the bell is annoying.
It means the event is effective. The people probably are filled with the bad thoughts.
Does this sound natural?
We ring big bells 108 times in temples on the last day of the year.
It's said that we have 108 polluting thoughts such as greed, hatred and etc and 108 times ringing bells could remove them.
These days, some people make complains that the sound of the bell is annoying.
It means the event is effective. The people probably are filled with the bad thoughts.
Does this sound natural?
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- English (US)
A little unnatural
There is an annual event called 除夜の鐘 Joya no kane in Japan.
We ring large bells 108 times in temples on the last day of the year.
It's said that we have 108 polluting thoughts such as greed, hatred, etc and ringing the bells 108 times could remove them.
These days, some people complain that the bell is annoying.
It means the event is effective because people probably are filled with the bad thoughts.
- English (US)
A little unnatural
Besides a few mistakes it’s really good
- Japanese
@Sophia_Auld Thanks for pointing that out!

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