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1 Jan 2020
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Help please!! I've been working on a project for school that involves a script where me and my partner have to broadcast a sports game in Japanese. I'll include the video we chose in a link below, if needed. The video goes along with the script. I'm not a Japanese native at all, and I am only in Japanese II. The script I wrote is way beyond that level, including help I got from this app. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read the script, hopefully give some feedback and advice as well as corrections. Thank you!
https://youtu.be/zUJWQOa74Oc
Help please!! I've been working on a project for school that involves a script where me and my partner have to broadcast a sports game in Japanese. I'll include the video we chose in a link below, if needed. The video goes along with the script. I'm not a Japanese native at all, and I am only in Japanese II. The script I wrote is way beyond that level, including help I got from this app. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read the script, hopefully give some feedback and advice as well as corrections. Thank you!
https://youtu.be/zUJWQOa74Oc
https://youtu.be/zUJWQOa74Oc
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so many unnatural points are there.
How did you make this script? translate from English? if so show me please.
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@hyperballad
ジェシカ:こんにちは、みなみさん！サッカーの試合始まっていますね。
みなみ:はい、イェール大学とUNC大学の試合ですよ。
ジェシカ:スコット・スターリングのプレーが楽しみです。とてもすごい選手なんですよ。
みなみ:そうなんですか？頭を大怪我してすごく痛そうです。かなり弱っているようです。
ジェシカ:はい、かなり出血が見られます。
みなみ:あ！倒れましたよ。
ジェシカ:あー！椅子を持ってきて座らせましたね。
みなみ:スターリングのチームは勝ち目がないでしょう。非常に痛そうです。大丈夫でしょうか？
ジェシカ:みなみさん、大丈夫ですよ。また止めました！驚きです。
みなみ:なんと、信じられない。スターリングのイェール大学またもやスーパーセーブ。
ジェシカ:スローモーションが見てみたいですね。凄い、ですがあまり気分のいいものではありませんね。
みなみ:そうですね。次はUNC大学です。先月はUNC大学の勝利でしたが、今月は必ずやイェール大学が勝ってくれますよ。
ジェシカ:なんというミスでしょう。動きが良くなかったですね。
みなみ:そうですねー、さあ次行きましょう。お楽しみのスターリングの出番です。
ジェシカ:私も楽しみです！しかし、スターリングに何かありましたでしょうか？
みなみ:スターリング選手退場したんでしょうか？
ジェシカ:いや！グラウンド上にいました！そしてゴールから這って遠ざかっていきます。変なの。
みなみ:変な話ですね。
ジェシカ:信じられない！スターリングまたもや止めました！
みなみ:何故そんなことができるんでしょうか。スターリング選手なんとか生きているようです。凄いですね！
ジェシカ:ホントに凄いです！イェール大学の勝利です。
みなみ:これは劇的な勝利になりました。スターリングのチームメイトが彼の元に集まっていきます。
ジェシカ:これでサッカーの試合は終了ですね。一緒に観戦してくれてありがとうございました、みなみさん。
I hope it would be helpful.
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@hyperballad You're welcome.
I'm glad to see that you live in Okinawa where I'm from.
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