20 Mar 03:37 PM

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In today’s world plenty of people have a lot on their minds. They are overwhelmed with many things. For example, school,work,home,extra classes.The message, that the Artist wanted to convey is the fact, that a lot of people expect from students,teenagers, or even adults things, that are impossible to manage and achieve. Teachers require pupils to do homework, to try harder, to Apply themselves.Parents judge their children from their results, and under these circumstances they can get stressed easily.When it comes to adults, jobs like lawyer,doctor,policeman are associated with stress.There is the time commitment, the risk aversion and the perfectionism, that get exacerbated or even clients demands.

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