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Hello guys. Could you check my Grammar in english of this sentence.
"According to a research on the CNN journal, there is 95 percent of population who are able to buy the Television. This leads to the information from many other rich resources that can be accessible to most people, which helps to enhance general."
Thanks so much.
Hello guys. Could you check my Grammar in english of this sentence.
"According to a research on the CNN journal, there is 95 percent of population who are able to buy the Television. This leads to the information from many other rich resources that can be accessible to most people, which helps to enhance general."
Thanks so much.
"According to a research on the CNN journal, there is 95 percent of population who are able to buy the Television. This leads to the information from many other rich resources that can be accessible to most people, which helps to enhance general."
Thanks so much.
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"According to research from the CNN journal, 95% of the population is able to buy a Television. This allows information from many rich resources to be accessible to most people, which helps _______."
The last part, I am not sure what you are trying to say with "which helps to enhance general."
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The forst sentence is good. 👍
However, for now, I'm not quite sure on what you want to imply on the second sentence. Is this about "tv helps the public know more information going around"?
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According to research from the CNN journal, 95% of the population is able to buy a television. This means that most people have access to information from many sources, which helps to enhance the general public.
The meaning of "which helps to enhance the general public" is unclear. How are they being enhanced?
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Thank you so much.@fox_w_mulder@kaijie99@Holland_Elliot .
could I ask you one more question. actually I want to keep the structure " lead to" in this sentence. so How can I fix this become to correct Grammar. Thanks a lot
could I ask you one more question. actually I want to keep the structure " lead to" in this sentence. so How can I fix this become to correct Grammar. Thanks a lot
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@kaijie99 Is mean that more and more Tv become population in the world. therefore most of information can reach to most poeple. thanks a lot
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@s_e_u You could say "This leads to information from rich sources being accessible to most people."
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@fox_w_mulder I agree with your suggestion! You can also say "from many rich resources"
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