24 Jun 10:02 PM

Question about English (US)

Title:My Heroes
Today I would like to tell you about Steve jobs.
Steve Jobs is a legend of the IT industry in the world.
But his life was like a roller coaster.
He made Apple Inc but as Apple was getting poor sales in the market, he was kicked out from the company.
A few years later he got a surprising suggestion from Apple Inc to come back.
So he came back to Apple Inc.
As soon as he comes back, he created surprising innovative products one after another.
You know, iPod, iPhone, iPad…etc.
He tried not only to products but also to overcome the copyrights of music.
I admire him because he made very creative products and changed people’s lives with his products.

Can you correct my sentences?

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