Hello, today my English teacher tell me that I would write about What do I do when I am sad? What do I do to deal with it? I'm not sure about my homework, please if I make a mistake correct me ( grammar, writing and punctuation marks or if I have to use other word for that it sounds more natural)

Whenever I am sad, I read a good book I think that read is a good way to habe support, it transports you another world, and it is so important to relax the mind. Sometimes I listen to my favorite songs when I'm sad, I like so much to listen to The Beatles, my favorite song is Let it be from the Beatles. Usually when I'm so sad, I cry a lot and I think I should improve in that aspect although, but anyway I keep going. Currently I didn't find to deal with my sadness, but I wrote it lines up, now I work for me.

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Hello, today my English teacher tell me that I would write about What do I do when I am sad? What do I do to deal with it?  I'm not sure about my homework, please if I make a mistake correct me ( grammar, writing and punctuation marks or if I have to use other word for that it sounds more natural)

Whenever I am sad,  I read a good book I think that read is a good way to habe support, it transports  you another world, and it is so important to relax the mind. Sometimes I listen to my favorite songs when I'm  sad, I like so much to listen to The Beatles, my favorite song is Let it be from the Beatles. Usually when I'm so sad, I cry a lot and I think I should improve in that aspect although, but anyway I keep going. Currently I didn't find to deal with my sadness, but I wrote it lines up, now I work for me.

TheAlmightySand · Answer

"...a good book. I think that reading is a good way to have support(. or ;) It transports you to another..."
"...when I'm sad. I like to listen to the Beatles so much. My favorite song is Let It Be by the Beatles."
(Las últimas dos oraciones me confunden. ¿Me puedes explicar qué quieres decir?)

alina365 · Answer

Hello! I bolded the parts that I corrected.

"Whenever I am sad, I read a good book. 𝗜 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗸 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗶𝘀 𝗮 𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗱 𝘄𝗮𝘆 𝘁𝗼 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗱 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗳𝗼𝗿𝘁 𝗯𝗲𝗰𝗮𝘂𝘀𝗲 𝗶𝘁 𝗷𝘂𝘀𝘁 𝘁𝗿𝗮𝗻𝘀𝗽𝗼𝗿𝘁𝘀 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘁𝗼 𝗮𝗻𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗹𝗱, 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗶𝘁 𝗶𝘀 𝘀𝗼 𝗶𝗺𝗽𝗼𝗿𝘁𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝘄𝗵𝗲𝗻 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝘁𝗼 𝗿𝗲𝗹𝗮𝘅 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗶𝗻𝗱. 𝗦𝗼𝗺𝗲𝘁𝗶𝗺𝗲𝘀, I listen to my favorite songs when I'm sad, 𝗹𝗶𝗸𝗲 𝘀𝗼𝗻𝗴𝘀 𝗯𝘆 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗕𝗲𝗮𝘁𝗹𝗲𝘀. My favorite song is "𝗟𝗲𝘁 𝗶𝘁 𝗯𝗲" by the Beatles. Usually, when I'm 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗹𝗹𝘆 sad, I cry a lot, 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗼𝘂𝗴𝗵 𝗜 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗸 𝗜 𝘀𝗵𝗼𝘂𝗹𝗱 𝘁𝗿𝘆 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗶𝗺𝗽𝗿𝗼𝘃𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁, 𝗜 𝘀𝘁𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗱𝗼 𝗶𝘁 𝗮𝗻𝘆𝘄𝗮𝘆. 𝗖𝘂𝗿𝗿𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗹𝘆, 𝗜 𝗵𝗮𝘃𝗲𝗻'𝘁 𝗳𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗱 𝗮 𝘀𝘂𝗿𝗲𝗳𝗶𝗿𝗲 𝘄𝗮𝘆 𝘁𝗼 𝗱𝗲𝗮𝗹 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗵 𝗺𝘆 𝘀𝗮𝗱𝗻𝗲𝘀𝘀, 𝗯𝘂𝘁 𝗮𝗳𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝘄𝗿𝗶𝘁𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗱𝗼𝘄𝗻, 𝗜 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗸 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝘀𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴𝘀 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗸 𝘄𝗲𝗹𝗹 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝗺𝗲.

alina365 · Answer

@Gia- Ahh okay let me edit that right now

alina365 · Answer

@Gia- there you go! sorry about the confusion ^^

alina365 · Answer

@Gia- No problem !

SiberianHusky · Answer

Whenever I am sad, I read a good book. I think that reading is a good way to find support, it transports you to another world, and it is so important to relax the mind. Sometimes I listen to my favorite songs when I'm sad, I like so much to listen to The Beatles, my favorite song is "Let it be" from the Beatles. Usually when I'm really sad, I cry a lot, I think I should improve in that aspect, anyways I keep going. Currently I didn't find a way to deal with my sadness, but as I wrote this lines, I feel somehow relieved.

I didn't fully understood what you were saying, I hope I interpreted your feelings properly. Good luck finding a way to cope with sadness, take care :)

sangrinsp · Answer

Whenever I am sad, I read a good book. I think that reading is a good way to find support, it transports you to another world, and it is so important to relax the mind. Sometimes I listen to my favorite songs when I'm sad, I like so much to listen to The Beatles, my favorite song is "Let it be" from the Beatles. Usually when I'm really sad, I cry a lot, I think I should improve in that aspect, anyways I keep going. Currently I didn't find a way to deal with my sadness, but as I wrote this lines, I feel somehow relieved.

I didn't fully understood what you were saying, I hope I interpreted your feelings properly. Good luck finding a way to cope with sadness, take care :)

I didn't fully understood what you were saying, I hope I interpreted your feelings properly. Good luck finding a way to cope with sadness, take care :)

"...a good book. I think that reading is a good way to have support(. or ;) It transports you to another...""...when I'm sad. I like to listen to the Beatles so much. My favorite song is Let It Be by the Beatles."(Las últimas dos oraciones me confunden. ¿Me puedes explicar qué quieres decir?)

@Gia- Ahh okay let me edit that right now

@Gia- there you go! sorry about the confusion ^^

@Gia- No problem !

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"...a good book. I think that reading is a good way to have support(. or ;) It transports you to another..."
"...when I'm sad. I like to listen to the Beatles so much. My favorite song is Let It Be by the Beatles."
(Las últimas dos oraciones me confunden. ¿Me puedes explicar qué quieres decir?)