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15 Aug 2020
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Please correct my journal ☀✨
In the summer, my insteps tend to get itchy because of heat rush.
Every time I scratch my insteps, it is wound.
I know that I ought not do it, but I can't stop scratch my insteps because I feel good when I scratch it.
However, don't worry about it because in the winter, my insteps will be get better each time.
I want winter to come soon.
Please correct my journal ☀✨
In the summer, my insteps tend to get itchy because of heat rush.
Every time I scratch my insteps, it is wound.
I know that I ought not do it, but I can't stop scratch my insteps because I feel good when I scratch it.
However, don't worry about it because in the winter, my insteps will be get better each time.
I want winter to come soon.
In the summer, my insteps tend to get itchy because of heat rush.
Every time I scratch my insteps, it is wound.
I know that I ought not do it, but I can't stop scratch my insteps because I feel good when I scratch it.
However, don't worry about it because in the winter, my insteps will be get better each time.
I want winter to come soon.
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Add ‘the’ after because in the first sentence
Add ‘because’ after it, then add ‘becomes a’ in the second sentence and remove ‘is’
“...it becomes a wound.”
‘Ought’ is southern, so if you wanted you could use ‘shouldn’t’ instead
“I know that I shouldn’t do it...”
“...stop scratching my insteps because it feels good.”
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