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30 Sep 2020
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Does this sound natural?
”Which better do you think, people work for the company as soon as graduating from high school or go on to higher education? ”
I think it depends on what they want to do in the future but in my case, I prefer to go on to college for a few reasons. Firstly, I can meet a lot of friends and I can learn many different perspectives and cultures through them. We can stimulate each other and it helps me grow up. Secondly, I can have plenty of time to think about what I want to do in the future and try many things. It would be difficult to make enough time to think about what I really want to do while working.
Does this sound natural?
”Which better do you think, people work for the company as soon as graduating from high school or go on to higher education? ”
I think it depends on what they want to do in the future but in my case, I prefer to go on to college for a few reasons. Firstly, I can meet a lot of friends and I can learn many different perspectives and cultures through them. We can stimulate each other and it helps me grow up. Secondly, I can have plenty of time to think about what I want to do in the future and try many things. It would be difficult to make enough time to think about what I really want to do while working.
”Which better do you think, people work for the company as soon as graduating from high school or go on to higher education? ”
I think it depends on what they want to do in the future but in my case, I prefer to go on to college for a few reasons. Firstly, I can meet a lot of friends and I can learn many different perspectives and cultures through them. We can stimulate each other and it helps me grow up. Secondly, I can have plenty of time to think about what I want to do in the future and try many things. It would be difficult to make enough time to think about what I really want to do while working.
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This sounds great! one piece of advice though, some teachers who are native speakers don't like it when people use words like firstly, or secondly. To sound even more grammatically correct, you can use other words, or even take out the word firstly and instead of secondly try the word "additionally".
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instead of saying " it helps me grow up" you can say "which will help me become more mature" or "which will help me grow as a person/into a better person"
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@BintaRaet Thank you for your kind comment and I really really appreciate it!! I will follow your advice.
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Thank you, I'm glad I could help! one last thing, try to change some of the "it can" to "it will". Just another way to impress your teachers and make the sentence run smooth. you don't want to use one word too many times
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