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It would be appreciated if you could correct sentences below.

I just read a novella titled "Loaded" by Joe Hill.
A begrudged ex-employer (as well as ex-lover) killed the jewelry shop owner using a gun.
Then a security guard who rushed to the scene wasn't able to grasp the situation, and wound up shooting both a Muslim customer and her baby to death, having mistaken her for a suicide-bomber, her baby as a bomb.
Then, he killed another witness, tampered with the evidence, and became a hero who had saved people from a massacre.
However, one female journalist came to have a question about what had really happened there.
Any reader might think she's going to solve the case, come to face off with the perpetrator, and defeat him into the bargain.
However, the story didn't end that way.I liked the ending, and didn't like it at the same time.

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