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I feel a little unnatural on this paragraph, could anyone help me to make it smoother? Thanks! “On the next day, I created and drew an experiment on a poster. This experiment was one of my experiments about marine environment protection I did in a science class. I dropped of ink into the water. Suddenly, the ink slowly dispersed, lightened, and disappeared, and the water was almost as clean as before; but if the ink kept dripping, the color of the water would become deeper, and finally turned into a basin of black water. After I finished drawing, I planned to take the poster and put it in a prominent place on the beach”

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