26 Nov 2014

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Question about English (US)

To Hyunbin

Love you. When you and I were walking together,

I closed my eyes.

And while walking with you,

a flower bloomed.


사랑해. 너랑 나랑 함께 걸어 다녔을 때

두 눈을 감고 걸었어.

그동안 꽃이 피었어.

I have just translated this korean kid's a cute poem. Could u please tell me if there is any awkward sentences?

Thank you! :)