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9 Feb 2017
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【URGENT】Please correct this composition!! Does this sound natural?
【URGENT】Please correct this composition!! Does this sound natural?
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9 Feb 2017
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- English (US)
Natural
It's spelled "minutes" but other than that it is very well written.
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- English (US)
Natural
It's spelled "minutes" but other than that it is very well written.
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- English (US)
A little unnatural
Great paragraph! Here are a few changes you can make to make it sound more natural.
The most impressive city is Osaka. There are two main reasons why. First, the roads are complex. It was difficult for me to get to the shop that I wanted to go to. The website said that it would take fifteen minutes to get there but it took me thirty minutes. Second, there are many people who are very kind. Some people gave me candy and the people I asked directions from showed me how to get to the shop. That's why Osaka is the most impressive city to me.
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