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9 Nov 2020
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Please help me with these sentences.
#1 It seems that my puppy is interested in the sounds of the vacuum, so he chases it when I use it.
#2 It seems that my puppy is interested in the sounds of the vacuum, so when I use it, he chases it.
Is #1 natural?
Is #2 unnatural? Saying #2 should be absolutely avoided?
Please help me with these sentences.
#1 It seems that my puppy is interested in the sounds of the vacuum, so he chases it when I use it.
#2 It seems that my puppy is interested in the sounds of the vacuum, so when I use it, he chases it.
Is #1 natural?
Is #2 unnatural? Saying #2 should be absolutely avoided?
#1 It seems that my puppy is interested in the sounds of the vacuum, so he chases it when I use it.
#2 It seems that my puppy is interested in the sounds of the vacuum, so when I use it, he chases it.
Is #1 natural?
Is #2 unnatural? Saying #2 should be absolutely avoided?
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They're both natural, but #1 is better.
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