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Most of the children nowadays are eating and drinking lots of processing food which is absolutely not good. Though I tell them not to consume too much and are unhealthy, they can't seem to control the desire of those unhealthy edible. I also feel bad to find that they are loosing their time on social media ,watching too much TV, playing video games and not reading books. Another thing I am disappointed to find about these young children is that they are ruder than the previous generations/ our generation. Does this sound natural?
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"Most of the children nowadays are eating and drinking lots of processed food. Though I tell them not to consume too much and that it is unhealthy, they can't seem to control their desire to eat unhealthy foods."
"..... they are wasting their time on social media....."
Everything else was fine :)
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A little unnatural
This is pretty good! However, here is how I would correct it:
"Many children nowadays are eating and drinking lots of processed foods and beverages, which is not good. Though I tell them to not consume too much because it is unhealthy, they can't seem to control themselves. Furthermore, they are wasting time on social media, watching too much TV, playing video games, and as a result are not reading books. Another thing I am disappointed to find about these young children is that they are ruder than previous generations/our generation."
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