21 Nov 2020

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Hi, this makes sense or sounds good? It's a song I wrote, I could only attach 10 seconds of audio, here are the lyrics, Thank you :)
link of the song:

leaving your eyes
torture my Soul
mental disguise
out of control

Leaving your mind
drying up my Blood
inside this lie
Under control

Crossing the line
Dragging me down
I need to find
My cure on the ground

I see red lights, Under pressure
nothing left to say
I can't touch my own lifeblood
make me lose my Soul

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