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29 Nov 2020
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If there are any mistakes in the following sentences, please let me know.
Also, if you have any comments, please write them.
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I am very happy to be able to continue learning as long as I am alive, but it is dangerous to forget activity of what I learned itself , even if my memory is weakened and I forget what I learned.
< Improvisation for the sentences by piano -1 >
https://youtu.be/zfnEiicqcRA
If there are any mistakes in the following sentences, please let me know.
Also, if you have any comments, please write them.
： ： ： ： ： ： ： ： ： ：
I am very happy to be able to continue learning as long as I am alive, but it is dangerous to forget activity of what I learned itself , even if my memory is weakened and I forget what I learned.
< Improvisation for the sentences by piano -1 >
https://youtu.be/zfnEiicqcRA
Also, if you have any comments, please write them.
： ： ： ： ： ： ： ： ： ：
I am very happy to be able to continue learning as long as I am alive, but it is dangerous to forget activity of what I learned itself , even if my memory is weakened and I forget what I learned.
< Improvisation for the sentences by piano -1 >
https://youtu.be/zfnEiicqcRA
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I am very happy to be able to continue learning for as long as I am alive, but it is dangerous to forget what I already learned. When my memory is weakened I will have forgotten what I learned
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@makkmuq
Thank you for your reply and suggestions.
It seems that my English composition is lacking in power, but it seems that the revised text by Mr. makkmuq and what I meant are different.
For example, what was I doing this time yesterday? When I try to remember, I sometimes forget whether I was sleeping, eating, going shopping, studying, etc...
For that reason I tried to wrote that this is dangerous.
Does the previous sentence match?
I improvised that feeling on the piano.
https://youtu.be/zfnEiicqcRA
Thank you for your reply and suggestions.
It seems that my English composition is lacking in power, but it seems that the revised text by Mr. makkmuq and what I meant are different.
For example, what was I doing this time yesterday? When I try to remember, I sometimes forget whether I was sleeping, eating, going shopping, studying, etc...
For that reason I tried to wrote that this is dangerous.
Does the previous sentence match?
I improvised that feeling on the piano.
https://youtu.be/zfnEiicqcRA
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