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isocchi

29 Nov 2020

Japanese

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Please correct these. I wanted to use comparative in the second sentence.

In winter in Japan, the air get drier and clearer. This let us see far away in the distance than the other seasons at the peak of mountains. That’s the reason I like climbing up mountains in winter.

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aarushialreja

29 Nov 2020

English (US)

you should say
During winter in Japan,the air gets dry and clear. This lets us see far away in the distance at the peak of mountains than the other seasons. That's the reason I like climbing mountains in winter.

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aarushialreja

29 Nov 2020

English (US)

don't say climbing up since climbing already means up not down

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Crichu

29 Nov 2020

English (US)
Filipino Near fluent

In Japan, the air gets drier and clearer during winter. This allows us to see far away in the distance, as opposed to other seasons, at the peak of mountains. This is the reason why I like climbing mountains during winter.

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isocchi

29 Nov 2020

Japanese

@aarushialreja Indeed!

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isocchi

29 Nov 2020

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@Crichu Thank you!

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Crichu

29 Nov 2020

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my pleasure, @isocchi-san ^^

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Please correct these. I wanted to use comparative in the second sentence.In winter in Japan, the air get drier and clearer. This let us see far away in the distance than the other seasons at the peak of mountains. That’s the reason I like climbing up mountains in winter. See a translation

you should sayDuring winter in Japan,the air gets dry and clear. This lets us see far away in the distance at the peak of mountains than the other seasons. That's the reason I like climbing mountains in winter.

don't say climbing up since climbing already means up not down

In Japan, the air gets drier and clearer during winter. This allows us to see far away in the distance, as opposed to other seasons, at the peak of mountains. This is the reason why I like climbing mountains during winter.

my pleasure, @isocchi-san ^^

Please correct these. I wanted to use comparative in the second sentence.

In winter in Japan, the air get drier and clearer. This let us see far away in the distance than the other seasons at the peak of mountains. That’s the reason I like climbing up mountains in winter.

See a translation

you should say
During winter in Japan,the air gets dry and clear. This lets us see far away in the distance at the peak of mountains than the other seasons. That's the reason I like climbing mountains in winter.