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30 Nov 2020
- Russian
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English (US)
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can I say, "I took the position of a person responsible for accompaniment of participants, and if I failed to find one, they can lose their game. Participation in this tournament allowed me to strengthen a sense of responsibility and develop my organizational skills"?
can I say, "I took the position of a person responsible for accompaniment of participants, and if I failed to find one, they can lose their game. Participation in this tournament allowed me to strengthen a sense of responsibility and develop my organizational skills"?
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- English (US)
@pacificccoast1
This is awkward and hard to follow. It feels like you may be trying to be more complex than you should be. Writing in a simple manner is hard, writing in a complex manner almost impossible. What is the intent? Audience?
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- Russian
I'm trying to write in a simple manner. I don't know why it is complex:)
- Russian
can you please help me write it correctly?
- English (US)
@pacificccoast1
I will once I can understand what is going on. What is this for? What is the intent? Who is the audience?
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- Russian
I'm writing about tournament where I have been a volunteer
- English (US)
@pacificccoast1
"accompaniment of participants" -- what does this mean?
"and if I failed to find one" -- failed to find what?
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