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30 Nov 2020
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can I say, "I’m happy to be a part of the team of students, who are organizing varied programs in physical activity and sport, thus enhancing students' personal development and providing them with experience of movement.
This commission not only gave me the opportunity to make new friends, but also helped me build organizational and creativity skills"?
can I say, "I’m happy to be a part of the team of students, who are organizing varied programs in physical activity and sport, thus enhancing students' personal development and providing them with experience of movement.
This commission not only gave me the opportunity to make new friends, but also helped me build organizational and creativity skills"?
This commission not only gave me the opportunity to make new friends, but also helped me build organizational and creativity skills"?
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30 Nov 2020
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@pacificccoast1
I’m happy to be a part of a team of students who are organizing varied programs in physical activity and sport. These programs enhance students' personal development and provide them with experience of movement. (<— What does “of movement” mean or refer to?)
This commission has not only given me the opportunity to make new friends but has also helped me build and augment my organizational and creative skills.
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You can, but do you have to? It is very long-winded and a run on sentence. Is this for writing or speaking?
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@pacificccoast1
I’m happy to be a part of a team of students who are organizing varied programs in physical activity and sport. These programs enhance students' personal development and provide them with experience of movement. (<— What does “of movement” mean or refer to?)
This commission has not only given me the opportunity to make new friends but has also helped me build and augment my organizational and creative skills.
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wow that is very well done its a little different like say different instead of varied
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