30 Dec 2020

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I would like you to change my essay to natural native expressions. My essay for biking to work is as below. Please modify my sentences as much as possible.

I think it would be very beneficial to bike to work. There are three reasons for this. For one thing, it saves money. One ride the bus may not be expensive, but if you think about it over a month or a year, it costs too much. Secondly, It is good exercise. It's good for your health to exercise for at least 30 minutes every day. Thirdly, compared to the bus, there is almost no exposure to infection. For all these reasons, I strongly think commuting by bicycle is very useful.

I am learning English. I wanna do shadowing by using native expressions. Thank you.
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