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23 January
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英検準二級のライティング問題です。
文法、文章の構造、スペルミス等間違っているところがあれば教えて下さい。
問題 Do you think fast-food restaurants are a good thing for people?
英検準二級のライティング問題です。
文法、文章の構造、スペルミス等間違っているところがあれば教えて下さい。
問題 Do you think fast-food restaurants are a good thing for people?
文法、文章の構造、スペルミス等間違っているところがあれば教えて下さい。
問題 Do you think fast-food restaurants are a good thing for people?
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問題は「ファストフードは人にいいことと思いますか？」と聞いているんですけど…
"Museum" は博物館の意味ですよ
そして、文法はちょっと違います。
"I don't think *that* parents should take their children to *the* museum."
"Second, we are able to search *on the* internet, so we don't need to go to *the* museum"
"That is why" の後に読点は必要がない。
"The"を忘れないで！
スペルミスはなし(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
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こんにちは
Add "the" before museum so it is "the museum".
I don't think parents should take their children to (the) museum.
First, It is boring for them to go to (the) museum.
Second, we are able to search (the) internet.
Change "at internet" to "the internet"
That is why I don't think parents should take their children to (the) museum.
Change "That is why, I don't" to "That is why I don't".
I hope this helps :)
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I’ll try putting all those sentences together to form a text!
I don’t think parents should take their kids to museums. There are two reasons for that, the first is that museums can be boring for them. Secondly, we are able to look it up (or search it) on the internet. In conclusion, that’s why I think parents shouldn’t take their kids to museums.
I changed it up a bit to keep it more fluent and natural :) but I tried my best to keep the essence of the text!
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問題は「ファストフードは人にいいことと思いますか？」と聞いているんですけど…
"Museum" は博物館の意味ですよ
そして、文法はちょっと違います。
"I don't think *that* parents should take their children to *the* museum."
"Second, we are able to search *on the* internet, so we don't need to go to *the* museum"
"That is why" の後に読点は必要がない。
"The"を忘れないで！
スペルミスはなし(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Highly-rated answerer
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