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23 Jan 2021
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Is this sentence natural?
What did you do yesterday?
I went shopping to the mall with my family. In there, we decided to buy what we want up to 1000 yen per person. My daughter bought make up products like cheeks and lipstick.
Is this sentence natural?
What did you do yesterday?
I went shopping to the mall with my family. In there, we decided to buy what we want up to 1000 yen per person. My daughter bought make up products like cheeks and lipstick.
What did you do yesterday?
I went shopping to the mall with my family. In there, we decided to buy what we want up to 1000 yen per person. My daughter bought make up products like cheeks and lipstick.
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@shinada it's mostly natural just need a little change "What did you do yesterday?
I went shopping with my family to the mall. There we decided to buy, whatever we want, it could be up to 1,000 yen per person. My daughter bought some make up products, like blush and lipstick.
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@shinada A few mistakes here’s some corrections
1. I went shopping at the mall with my family
2. While there, we decided to buy anything we wanted up to 1000 yen per person.
3. My daughter bought some makeup for her cheeks(don’t know kind) and some lipstick
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