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26 January

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Sometimes you can get a fever when you have an infection, your body temperature increases (to sweat and you start)to cool your body down.

Is the English word order correct?

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Lucy_Huerra

26 January

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Sometimes you can get a fever when your body has an infection; your body temperature increases and you start to sweat to cool your body down.

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Lucy_Huerra

26 January

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Sometimes you can get a fever when you have an infection, you body temperature increases and you start to sweat. This happens to cool your body down.

I changed the last bit of the sentence to make it correct.

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f8c17334

26 January

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Sometimes you can get a fever when you have an infection, your body temperature increases and you start to sweat to cool your body down.

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Lucy_Huerra

26 January

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Yes, but put a semicolon ; where the comma is.

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Sometimes you can get a fever when your body has an infection; your body temperature increases and you start to sweat to cool your body down.

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Sometimes you can get a fever when you have an infection, your body temperature increases (to sweat and you start)to cool your body down.Is the English word order correct? See a translation

Sometimes you can get a fever when your body has an infection; your body temperature increases and you start to sweat to cool your body down.

Sometimes you can get a fever when you have an infection, you body temperature increases and you start to sweat. This happens to cool your body down. I changed the last bit of the sentence to make it correct.

Yes, but put a semicolon ; where the comma is.

Sometimes you can get a fever when your body has an infection; your body temperature increases and you start to sweat to cool your body down.

Sometimes you can get a fever when you have an infection, your body temperature increases (to sweat and you start)to cool your body down.

Is the English word order correct?

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Sometimes you can get a fever when you have an infection, you body temperature increases and you start to sweat. This happens to cool your body down.

I changed the last bit of the sentence to make it correct.