Question
26 January
- Japanese
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English (US)
Question about English (US)
Please correct my journal 🍊 🍊 🍊
I ate the remaining one satsuma. For some reason I felt sad at the time. Maybe it's because I've been eating satsumas after a meal and I love eating them.
If I forgot to buy them, I might be disappointed, so tomorrow I have to buy some satsumas.
Satsumas are the source of energy for my day.
Please correct my journal 🍊 🍊 🍊
I ate the remaining one satsuma. For some reason I felt sad at the time. Maybe it's because I've been eating satsumas after a meal and I love eating them.
If I forgot to buy them, I might be disappointed, so tomorrow I have to buy some satsumas.
Satsumas are the source of energy for my day.
I ate the remaining one satsuma. For some reason I felt sad at the time. Maybe it's because I've been eating satsumas after a meal and I love eating them.
If I forgot to buy them, I might be disappointed, so tomorrow I have to buy some satsumas.
Satsumas are the source of energy for my day.
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- English (US)
- Arabic
Sounds good
I would just say “remaining satsuma” and remove “one”

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