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26 Jan 2021
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English (UK)
Question about English (US)
If I were given a free holiday, I would like to visit Los Angels, because I have been thinking about Yosemite National Park for a long time. There is the biggest trees in the world and I saw a picture of them in a text book before. If the tree falls down, they will hollow out the tree and make a big tunnel which is big enough to drive a car through. Due to the large size of the trees, it’s impossible to move them.
Don’t you think it is amazing?
Does this sound natural?
If I were given a free holiday, I would like to visit Los Angels, because I have been thinking about Yosemite National Park for a long time. There is the biggest trees in the world and I saw a picture of them in a text book before. If the tree falls down, they will hollow out the tree and make a big tunnel which is big enough to drive a car through. Due to the large size of the trees, it’s impossible to move them.
Don’t you think it is amazing?
Does this sound natural?
Don’t you think it is amazing?
Does this sound natural?
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It seems you're learning both UK and US English. A "holiday" in the US is referred to as a vacation if you wanted to use this as an alternative word.
Los Angels is spelled Los Angeles.
Change "There is the biggest trees in the world and I saw a picture of them in a text book before." to "It contains the biggest trees in the world, and I saw a picture of them in a text book before."
"If a tree falls down, they will hollow out the tree and make a big tunnel which is big enough to drive a car through." Change "the" to "a" since you're not talking about any specific tree.
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