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27 January
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Please correct my essay.
I love baseball so much. I’ve played baseball for 14 years long from third grades to graduating from university. Now, I work as an umpire, not player. The reason why I started playing baseball is that I would have watched baseball games on TV when I was a child and my dad liked baseball. When I was a young, I liked catchers and umpires who were wearing masks. I wanted to play a catcher, but I actually played a pitcher. At first, I was an overhand pitcher, but I turned to be a sidearm pitcher or a submarine. Although I couldn’t pitch a fast ball, I was confident with my control and breaking ball. I was able to pitch 5 kinds of breaking ball. Baseball practice was so much though, but it’s one of my best memories in the now. I’ve kept in touch with my teammates.
Please correct my essay.
I love baseball so much. I’ve played baseball for 14 years long from third grades to graduating from university. Now, I work as an umpire, not player. The reason why I started playing baseball is that I would have watched baseball games on TV when I was a child and my dad liked baseball. When I was a young, I liked catchers and umpires who were wearing masks. I wanted to play a catcher, but I actually played a pitcher. At first, I was an overhand pitcher, but I turned to be a sidearm pitcher or a submarine. Although I couldn’t pitch a fast ball, I was confident with my control and breaking ball. I was able to pitch 5 kinds of breaking ball. Baseball practice was so much though, but it’s one of my best memories in the now. I’ve kept in touch with my teammates.
I love baseball so much. I’ve played baseball for 14 years long from third grades to graduating from university. Now, I work as an umpire, not player. The reason why I started playing baseball is that I would have watched baseball games on TV when I was a child and my dad liked baseball. When I was a young, I liked catchers and umpires who were wearing masks. I wanted to play a catcher, but I actually played a pitcher. At first, I was an overhand pitcher, but I turned to be a sidearm pitcher or a submarine. Although I couldn’t pitch a fast ball, I was confident with my control and breaking ball. I was able to pitch 5 kinds of breaking ball. Baseball practice was so much though, but it’s one of my best memories in the now. I’ve kept in touch with my teammates.
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I love baseball so much. I’ve been playing baseball for 14 years now. I started playing it in third grade and i kept playing it till I graduated from university. Now, I work as an umpire, not a player. The reason why I started playing baseball is because i liked watching baseball games on TV as child and my dad enjoyed baseball just as much. When I was a young, I liked catchers and umpires who were wearing masks. I wanted to play as a catcher, but I actually played a pitcher. At first, I was an overhand pitcher, but then I became a sidearm pitcher or a submarine. Although I couldn’t pitch a fast ball, I was confident with my control and breaking ball. I was able to pitch 5 kinds of breaking balls. Baseball practice was so much to handle though, but it’s one of best memories i have now. I’ve kept in touch with my teammates.
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I love baseball so much. I’ve been playing baseball for 14 years now. I started playing it in third grade and i kept playing it till I graduated from university. Now, I work as an umpire, not a player. The reason why I started playing baseball is because i liked watching baseball games on TV as child and my dad enjoyed baseball just as much. When I was a young, I liked catchers and umpires who were wearing masks. I wanted to play as a catcher, but I actually played a pitcher. At first, I was an overhand pitcher, but then I became a sidearm pitcher or a submarine. Although I couldn’t pitch a fast ball, I was confident with my control and breaking ball. I was able to pitch 5 kinds of breaking balls. Baseball practice was so much to handle though, but it’s one of best memories i have now. I’ve kept in touch with my teammates.
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