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28 January
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is this sentence right?
i'd appreciate it if you would teach correct sentence.
You have to try to get some sleep enough for you to function properly next day.
Overdoing no matter what it is can adversely affect on your brain.
Even if reading is good for your brain , if you are up all night reading a book , do you think it's gonna be a good influence no you?
is this sentence right?
i'd appreciate it if you would teach correct sentence.
You have to try to get some sleep enough for you to function properly next day.
Overdoing no matter what it is can adversely affect on your brain.
Even if reading is good for your brain , if you are up all night reading a book , do you think it's gonna be a good influence no you?
i'd appreciate it if you would teach correct sentence.
You have to try to get some sleep enough for you to function properly next day.
Overdoing no matter what it is can adversely affect on your brain.
Even if reading is good for your brain , if you are up all night reading a book , do you think it's gonna be a good influence no you?
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- English (US)
I would appreciate it if you would teach the correct sentence.
You have to try to get enough sleep to function properly the next day.
No matter what, overdoing it can adversely affect your brain.
Even if reading is good for your brain, do you think staying up all night reading will have a good influence on you?
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- English (US)
I would appreciate it if you would teach the correct sentence.
You have to try to get enough sleep to function properly the next day.
No matter what, overdoing it can adversely affect your brain.
Even if reading is good for your brain, do you think staying up all night reading will have a good influence on you?
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@sticatto thank you so much for your help :)
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- English (US)
You have to try and get enough sleep for you to properly function the next day. No matter what it is, overdoing it can have an adverse effect on your brain. Even though reading is good for your brain, if you are up all night reading a book, do you think itâs still going to be a good influence on you?
- English (US)
First sentence:
You have to try to get enough sleep to function properly the next day
You have to try to get some sleep. At least enough for you to function properly the next day.
*Saying âsome sleepâ and then âenoughâ is conflicting. Pick one or the other.
Second sentence:
Overdoing something can adversely affect your brain, no matter what it is.
Not getting enough sleep can have adverse effects on your brain.
*It would be either âadverse effects on your brainâ or âadversely affects your brainâ. âEffectsâ is a noun that can be applied âon your brain.â âAffectsâ is a verb and does not need âonâ to apply to your brain.
Third sentence:
Even if reading is good for you, if you are up all night reading a book, itâs not gonna be good for you.
*âDo you think itâs gonna be a good influence on you?â could be a separate question. Nothing is really being influenced, so it would sound better to say âbad for you.â
I didnât explain everything I changed, but there are a million different ways to rephrase these sentences. It just depends on your preference. This is very understandable though! Good work!
*hope I didnât confuse you too muchđ*
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