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25 February
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I want to send some words to a friend of mine who recently lost her rabbit Mugi-chan. Would you check and correct my English below?
“I saw your posts of Mugi-chan on Instagram and I’m really moved by what they showed.
Some of them were so heartbreakingly to me I could barely glance.
I admired what you have done for her. I can see how deeply you loved and will love her from those pictures. I believe she was very lucky and happy to be with you. “
I want to send some words to a friend of mine who recently lost her rabbit Mugi-chan. Would you check and correct my English below?
“I saw your posts of Mugi-chan on Instagram and I’m really moved by what they showed.
Some of them were so heartbreakingly to me I could barely glance.
I admired what you have done for her. I can see how deeply you loved and will love her from those pictures. I believe she was very lucky and happy to be with you. “
“I saw your posts of Mugi-chan on Instagram and I’m really moved by what they showed.
Some of them were so heartbreakingly to me I could barely glance.
I admired what you have done for her. I can see how deeply you loved and will love her from those pictures. I believe she was very lucky and happy to be with you. “
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- English (US)
“I saw your posts of Mugi-chan on Instagram and I’m really moved by what they said.
Some of them were so heartbreaking I could barely look.
I admired what you have done for her. I can see how deeply you loved and will love her from those pictures. I believe she was very lucky and happy to be with you. “
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- English (US)
“I saw your posts of Mugi-chan on Instagram and I’m really moved by what they said.
Some of them were so heartbreaking I could barely look.
I admired what you have done for her. I can see how deeply you loved and will love her from those pictures. I believe she was very lucky and happy to be with you. “
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- English (US)
“I saw your posts of Mugi-chan on Instagram and I’m really moved by what they showed.
Some of them were so heartbreaking to me I could barely look.
I admired what you have done for her. I can see how deeply you loved her and will always love her from those pictures. I believe she was very lucky and happy to be with you. “
- Japanese
Why can’t it be “glance”? How is it better to use “look” than “glance”?
- English (US)
@masatsgu_mori It felt weird so I changed it. It's not grammatically incorrect.
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- English (US)
Your writing is very good and only needs a few small changes.
Sentence 1 -- perfect
Sentence 2 change "heartbreakingly" to "heartbreaking"
Sentence 3 change "admired" to "admire"
Sentence 4 change "will love" to "will continue to love"
Sentence 5 -- perfect
You have written a very kind and heartfelt note to your friend.
I am sure it will mean a lot to her.
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@Bakuhan you are saying you think “could barely look” is commonly used than “could barely glance” so it sounds more natural? If so I believe I should change it.
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@Bakuhan Thank you for your help. It means a lot to me.
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@gg6ee Thank you for your lucid answering and kind words. You have given me some confidence.
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