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27 February

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can you check my grammar mistakes for me? It's a fanfiction.

Toge wrapped his arms behind waist and pulled you into his lap, he rested his chin on your shoulder and whisper in your ear made you shiver.

"Sensei, you look so cute ~"

"Toge, don't be disrespectful to your teacher," you said while trying to get out of Toge's arms.

He hugs you tighter. "So you should stop being a teacher, okay?"

"What? Me ... A!" You moan as Toge bends her head down, bites and leaves a hickey on your neck.

"What the hell are you doing?" Once again, you try to remove Toge's arms that are hugging you, but you are unsuccessful. You angrily shouted at him.

Toge doesn't feel bad about being scolded by you. He reaches your ear and speaks softly.

"Your sound is so seductive. Sensei, I love you. Will you marry me?"

"No." You reply very quickly.

Toge put on a mysterious smile hiding behind his collar, he said.

"It's okay, I'll make you love me, and then you'll have to marry me."
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