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"It's been a long time to have one of my favorite soul foods. This food's name is 닭칼국수 Dak-kalguksu. I've had this for almost 20years. The restaurant's name is '다락투' in Hongdae. I trust the chef's honestly for providing clean food. The chicken stock is very deep and clean. It's not that oily. Their side dishes are always very fresh. It seems that they don't advertise themselves much. So I'm gonna sharing the location URL https://g.co/kgs/Mp1rq8 for someone who currently stays in Korea 😋 If you want to avoid crowded times then visit at 4-5pm. There were no people when I visited at that time. Big recommendation as a local resident 🍜"

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Does my writing sounds natural? Please correct me 🙇🏻‍♀️

"It's been a long time to have one of my favorite soul foods. This food's name is 닭칼국수 Dak-kalguksu. I've had this for almost 20years. The restaurant's name is '다락투' in Hongdae. I trust the chef's honestly for providing clean food. The chicken stock is very deep and clean. It's not that oily. Their side dishes are always very fresh. It seems that they don't advertise themselves much. So I'm gonna sharing the location URL https://g.co/kgs/Mp1rq8 for someone who currently stays in Korea 😋 If you want to avoid crowded times then visit at 4-5pm. There were no people when I visited at that time. Big recommendation as a local resident 🍜"

0kgal · Answer

It's been a long time since I had one of my favorite soul foods. This food's name is 닭칼국수 (Dak-kalguksu). I've had this/it for almost 20 years (now). The restaurant's name is '다락투' (located) in Hongdae. I trust the chef to provide clean food. The chicken stock is very deep and clean, it's not that oily, and their side dishes are always very fresh. It seems like they don't advertise themselves very much. So I'm gonna sharing the location URL: https://g.co/kgs/Mp1rq8, for someone who is currently staying in Korea. 😋 If you want to avoid crowds, visit it at 4-5 pm. There were no people when I visited during that time. Big recommendation as a local resident! 🍜

- By the way, if you have Whatsapp and would like help with your English, we can exchange information! (´• ᴗ •̥`✿)

- By the way, if you have Whatsapp and would like help with your English, we can exchange information! (´• ᴗ •̥`✿)

0kgal · Answer

@eternalphy ; Here you go!

chen7777 · Answer

@eternalphy

"It's been a long time since I’ve had one of my favorite soul foods. It’s called 닭칼국수 Dak-kalguksu. I've been having this for almost 20 years. The restaurant's name is '다락투' in Hongdae. I trust the chef to always provide clean food. The chicken stock is always deep and clean, plus it’s not too oily. Their side dishes are also always very fresh. It seems as if they don't advertise themselves much. So I’m sharing the location URL https://g.co/kgs/Mp1rq8 for anyone who’s in Korea right now and wants to check it out 😋 If you want to avoid peak hour then visit between 4-5pm. There weren’t a lot of people when I visited at that time. I highly recommend this as a local resident 🍜"

@eternalphy ; Here you go!

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