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14 Apr 2021
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Please be strict with the corrections :)
What can I do to make my sentences better?
1) Nuclear weapons should be banned because of threatening all of the lives on Earth.
2) If two countries use nuclear weapons, it would lead to catastrophic climate change.
3) Billions of people may die due to blocking out the sun by smoke from fires for months, causing widespread famine.
Please be strict with the corrections :)
What can I do to make my sentences better?
1) Nuclear weapons should be banned because of threatening all of the lives on Earth.
2) If two countries use nuclear weapons, it would lead to catastrophic climate change.
3) Billions of people may die due to blocking out the sun by smoke from fires for months, causing widespread famine.
What can I do to make my sentences better?
1) Nuclear weapons should be banned because of threatening all of the lives on Earth.
2) If two countries use nuclear weapons, it would lead to catastrophic climate change.
3) Billions of people may die due to blocking out the sun by smoke from fires for months, causing widespread famine.
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Here's my suggested edits:
1) Nuclear weapons should be banned because they threaten all lives on Earth.
2) If two countries each use nuclear weapons, they will cause catastrophic climate change.
3) Billions of people may die due the sun being blocked out for months by smoke from fires, causing widespread famine
They already sounded pretty good though 👍
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Here's my suggested edits:
1) Nuclear weapons should be banned because they threaten all lives on Earth.
2) If two countries each use nuclear weapons, they will cause catastrophic climate change.
3) Billions of people may die due the sun being blocked out for months by smoke from fires, causing widespread famine
They already sounded pretty good though 👍
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Thank you for your suggestion!!
I have a question.
You use only 'due' in sentence 3, and does this need 'to'?
Thank you for your suggestion!!
I have a question.
You use only 'due' in sentence 3, and does this need 'to'?
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