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18 Apr 2021
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"One of the guys I worked with was really strange. We talked about the possibility of quitting the job at the kitchen, and he decided on the spot to tell the manager that he wants to quit the job. When I got back to the kitchen from cleaning some of the rooms, the manager was cooking for his dinner, and the guy said he had told he and I want to quit the job. I was surprised because I never thought he would tell him about me. After the manager left, I told him that it was inappropriate for him to talk about my quitting the job to the manager. If I want to quit, I’ll tell him, not you. He said sorry. "
I'm so sorry the passage is too long, but could you please check it for me? Thank you in advance!
"One of the guys I worked with was really strange. We talked about the possibility of quitting the job at the kitchen, and he decided on the spot to tell the manager that he wants to quit the job. When I got back to the kitchen from cleaning some of the rooms, the manager was cooking for his dinner, and the guy said he had told he and I want to quit the job. I was surprised because I never thought he would tell him about me. After the manager left, I told him that it was inappropriate for him to talk about my quitting the job to the manager. If I want to quit, I’ll tell him, not you. He said sorry. "
I'm so sorry the passage is too long, but could you please check it for me? Thank you in advance!
I'm so sorry the passage is too long, but could you please check it for me? Thank you in advance!
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"One of the guys I worked with was really strange. We talked about the possibility of quitting our jobs in the kitchen, and he decided on the spot to tell the manager that he wanted to quit. When I got back to the kitchen from cleaning some of the rooms, the manager was cooking dinner, and the guy said he had told him that he and I want to quit our jobs. I was surprised because I never thought he would tell him about me. After the manager left, I told him that it was inappropriate for him to talk about my wanting to quit to the manager. “If I want to quit, I’ll tell him myself. It’s not for you to tell him.” He said “sorry. "
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@Sannettie Thank you so much for checking the rather long passage. I appreciate it. I learned a lot from your revision. Arigato gozaimasu.
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Let me know if you have any questions. You don’t need to keep repeating “job” bc it’s obvious, after you said it one time.
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