19 April

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What can I do to make my sentences better?

1) Actually, military spending is enhancing the quality of education and technology in society as a whole.
2) Soldiers are able to acquire special skills, which they can use for the rest of their lives.
3) Also, advancement in military technology is likely to lead to a variety of benefits for people.
4) For example, computers, microwaves, and GPS systems all started as military technology.

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