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26 Feb 2017

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I was always attracted to music. Hearing the soft notes ravishing the air, gently changing it into an amazing melody. For me, it was like my soul had been carried away. Drifting unconciously through an ocean of feelings, even if I was alone, I couldn't be more at peace. Every bone in my endless body was some how melted in an art piece, a verse of an undying song , a breath of fresh air in the universe of music.
It's something pure, heavenly made, which can change your life in a split of a second if you let it reach you.
Music brings release, brings freedom with every note one had ever created. It builds up worlds with elements of our imagination, creating astonishing pieces of work. Embrace the music. Use your own song to creat your world, be your own melody.

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