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I'm going to talk about my trip to Ica. When my family and I arrived at Ica we were exhausted but excited. The weather was sunny, so we went out for a walk to Ica's Plaza de Armas. After that, we went to make a tour, we visited 'Huachachina'. I was happy for be there. Then, we visited 'La palmera de 7 cabezas', when I looked it I was surprised because is mysterious and there is a leyend about it.
Are there any mistakes? Please tell me☺️
I'm going to talk about my trip to Ica. When my family and I arrived at Ica we were exhausted but excited. The weather was sunny, so we went out for a walk to Ica's Plaza de Armas. After that, we went to make a tour, we visited 'Huachachina'. I was happy for be there. Then, we visited 'La palmera de 7 cabezas', when I looked it I was surprised because is mysterious and there is a leyend about it.
Are there any mistakes? Please tell me☺️
Are there any mistakes? Please tell me☺️
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@eoegg I'm going to talk about my trip to Ica. When my family and I arrived at Ica we were exhausted-but excited. The weather was sunny, so we went out for a walk to Ica's Plaza de Armas. After that, we went on a tour and visited 'Huachachina'. I was happy for be there. Then, we visited 'La palmera de 7 cabezas'. When I looked at it I was surprised because it was mysterious and there is a legend about it.
This is a good start but just try to make the sentences shorter cause they feel like run ons.
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@eoegg I'm going to talk about my trip to Ica. When my family and I arrived at Ica we were exhausted-but excited. The weather was sunny, so we went out for a walk to Ica's Plaza de Armas. After that, we went on a tour and visited 'Huachachina'. I was happy for be there. Then, we visited 'La palmera de 7 cabezas'. When I looked at it I was surprised because it was mysterious and there is a legend about it.
This is a good start but just try to make the sentences shorter cause they feel like run ons.
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@ClayryssG thanks a lot for helping.
One question, when I talk about 'we went on a tour' I mean that the tour is: visit Huacachina and La palmera de 7 cabezas.
And you say: we went on a tour and visited Huacachina.
Is it still correct according to the context?
One question, when I talk about 'we went on a tour' I mean that the tour is: visit Huacachina and La palmera de 7 cabezas.
And you say: we went on a tour and visited Huacachina.
Is it still correct according to the context?
- English (US)
@eoegg hmm well yeah maybe say then instead “we went on the tour named Huacachina and La Palmera de 7 cabezas.”
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@ClayryssG uhmm nono 😅
I mean that the tour refers to visit 2 places ('huacachina' and 'la palmera de 7 cabezas')
I mean that the tour refers to visit 2 places ('huacachina' and 'la palmera de 7 cabezas')
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@eoegg Ohhhhh ok so then say that you went on the tour and then visited those two places if that makes any sense
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