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Topic: Agree or disagree: More needs to be done to improve public safety.

I agree with the idea that more and more needs to be done to improve public safety. I have two
reasons to support my opinion. First, a number of the car accident is increasing around the world these days. Thus, I think that the road is improved safer. For example, each countries can change road’s standard and boost a number of the signal. I believe that they enable to keep better their road’s circumstances. Second, more and more people concern about highly incident of crime. Nowadays, there a lot of thefts when it’s not night. It’s very dangerous for especially children and elderly people. That’s why I believe that countries around the world should confirm again how to their security. For these reasons, I think that more countries should improve their public to be safer. (136words)
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