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17 May

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Please correct my answer from the perspective of Grammar and Structure.

《Question》
More needs to improve public safety.

Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion

《My answer》
I think more needs to improve public safety.
There are two reasons for supporting my idea.
First of all, I think more serious regulation needs to drink driving and speeding. Especially, punishments against speeding is very important. In Japan, almost all cars are speeding. Some cars even twenty kilometers per hour over lethal speed limit. I think they may cause fatal accident someday.
Secondly, I think more chemicals in foods should be removed. Today’s chemicals used foods are not very dangerous. However, some chemicals consist of oil which may cause cancer. They threaten people’s health. Therefore, I think the chemicals which don’t need to maintain food safety should be removed.
According to the reasons stated above, I think the tasks to improve public safety are still remaining.

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