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1) If you cannot quit gambling, you will lose a lot of money.
2) There is no other option but to lend money, and as a result, many people often commit crimes to pay it back.
3) Some statistics show that a high percentage of heavy gamblers have committed crimes like stealing to pay for their gambling habit.
4) In other words, if gambling is restricted, crimes can be reduced.

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