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I’ve a question about the flow of passages. Which one do you think sounds more smooth?

Since the industrial revolution in the 19th century, technology has been developing exponentially to the point where it is now difficult to imagine the world without it. Although people today tend to over-rely on it, it has several negative influences on humanity in terms of communication, information, and health.


Since the industrial revolution in the 19th century, technology has been developing exponentially to the point where it is now difficult to imagine the world without it. People today tend to over-rely on it, but it has several negative influences on humanity in terms of communication, information, and health

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