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I think Japan should do more to protect its historic sites and I have two reasons.

First of all, there are a lot of people who like to go to the historic sites all over the world, so they come to Japan to see it and visit there. If Japan takes action to protect them, The number of visitors will be increased and it will have good impact on the Japanese economy.

Second of all, The historic knowledge is very helpful for everyone to live own life. When we learn it, it is the best way to go there and see them. Itโ€™s true that we can see them on TV or by using Internet, but to visit and feel the atmosphere will have something special meaning.

According to these reasons stated above, I believe that doing more to protect historic sites is important.

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