10 Mar 2017

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Beauty and the Beast

One day, a man lost his way. After he walked for a while, he found a castle. He entered the castle, and he was found by a beast. The Beast directed him to bring his daughter there.

His daughter, Beauty, went to the castle for her father. Her parents thought that she might be eaten by the Beast. However, she got along with the Beast.

A few days later, she had to come back home because her father had become sick. Though the Beast allowed her to do, Beauty made a promise that she would return there in seven days.

Eight days later, when she got back to the castle, the Beast was dying. She proposed to him. Suddenly, the beast became a prince. They fell in love with each other.

does this sound natural?

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