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29 Oct 2021
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Please help me check my writing is correct. I am not sure about how to connect different sentence. Just ignore the math part if it borthers you.
Please help me check my writing is correct. I am not sure about how to connect different sentence. Just ignore the math part if it borthers you.

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30 Oct 2021
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Some comma issues:
"But now we have another option:" (no comma).
When you use "i.e." you need a comma before (which you have) *and* a comma after (which you do not), e.g.,
"[...] to reject classification, i.e., if [...]"
More on this: https://ontariotraining.net/grammar-tip-punctua...
"If Lr = 0, all our decisions can be rejections." (Note comma after the 0, since you need a comma after the if clause if it comes before the main clause. And "rejections" is better than "a rejection".)
Spelling error: "samllest" should be "smallest".
In the last sentence it should be: "...is always the smallest one under the following constraint: we decide..."
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- English (US)
Some comma issues:
"But now we have another option:" (no comma).
When you use "i.e." you need a comma before (which you have) *and* a comma after (which you do not), e.g.,
"[...] to reject classification, i.e., if [...]"
More on this: https://ontariotraining.net/grammar-tip-punctua...
"If Lr = 0, all our decisions can be rejections." (Note comma after the 0, since you need a comma after the if clause if it comes before the main clause. And "rejections" is better than "a rejection".)
Spelling error: "samllest" should be "smallest".
In the last sentence it should be: "...is always the smallest one under the following constraint: we decide..."
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- English (US)
I don't understand the math part but here's my best guess:
First sentence: "Based on Eq.2, we know that the minimum R(ai) is the best way to minimize risk on a decision."
2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: "So in order to make sure that our decision has the smallest risk, we need to check if ___________ and if it is equivalent to the equation ___________."
Last paragraph, 1st sentence: "If ______, then we can reject all of our decisions" We always use "If....then..." like 如果...那...
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