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21 Mar 2017

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I have some questions from someone's correction.

1)Why did he correct 'screen' to 'a screen'?
2)What is the difference between 'porn' and 'a porn movie'?
3)Why did he correct 'an administrator' to 'the administrator'? There are more than two administrators in a room.


My Original
"I saw a troll intentionally turning on a porn movie. I also saw another troll sharing SCREEN while he was watching A PORN MOVIE. So AN administrator quickly kicked them out."

Corrected
"I saw a troll intentionally turning on a porn movie. I also saw another troll sharing A SCREEN while he was watching PORN. So THE administrator quickly kicked them out."

Thank you in advance.
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