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17 January
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English (US)
Question about English (US)
How do you say this in English (US)? These days I don’t feel keeping my own time then what I want to do is traffic jam. Reading books is one of what I want to do. I decided to change my habits of after work to make reading time. I will do the best to solve this jam as much as possible.
How do you say this in English (US)? These days I don’t feel keeping my own time then what I want to do is traffic jam. Reading books is one of what I want to do. I decided to change my habits of after work to make reading time. I will do the best to solve this jam as much as possible.
Does this sound natural?
It's my English diary:)
It's my English diary:)
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18 January
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@Hagyong Okay so,
You should say "Reading books" instead of "reading a book"
So,
"Reading books is one of the things I want to do"
Next,
you should say "my best" not "the best"
So,
"I will do my best to solve this jam as much as possible"
Other than that, it's great! よくできた!! ♥ ️
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- English (US)
- Bengali
I don't really understand what you mean by the first sentence, but other than that,
I want read more books.
OR
I want to read books more often.
I decided to work on my habits by making time for reading after work.
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- Japanese
@mokuRat Thank you for your replying.
* These days I don’t feel keeping my own time then what I want to do is traffic jam.* means that I have what I want to do a lot. But I could not do them because I don’t have enough free time . Accumulating them looks like traffic jam!
It is difficult to explain this….
* These days I don’t feel keeping my own time then what I want to do is traffic jam.* means that I have what I want to do a lot. But I could not do them because I don’t have enough free time . Accumulating them looks like traffic jam!
It is difficult to explain this….
- English (US)
- Bengali
@Hagyong AH! I GET IT! The things you want to do keep piling up and congesting like a heavily trafficked road! Hmm .. then maybe phrase it like,
"These days I can't keep track of time, so the things I want to do end up in a traffic jam" ?
Or maybe
"These days, I don't have enough time so the things I want to do are like a traffic jam"
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- Japanese
@mokuRat Yes! I’m happy you understand that!
Thank you for suggesting me. Based on your help, I corrected my diary.How about this one?
These days, I don't have enough time so the things I want to do are like a traffic jam. Reading a book is one of things what I want to do.
I decided to change my habits.I decided to make reading time after work. I will do the best to solve this jam as much as possible.
どうでしょうか？？
Thank you for suggesting me. Based on your help, I corrected my diary.How about this one?
These days, I don't have enough time so the things I want to do are like a traffic jam. Reading a book is one of things what I want to do.
I decided to change my habits.I decided to make reading time after work. I will do the best to solve this jam as much as possible.
どうでしょうか？？
- English (US)
- Bengali
@Hagyong Okay so,
You should say "Reading books" instead of "reading a book"
So,
"Reading books is one of the things I want to do"
Next,
you should say "my best" not "the best"
So,
"I will do my best to solve this jam as much as possible"
Other than that, it's great! よくできた!! ♥ ️
Highly-rated answerer
- Japanese
@mokuRat awesome! I’m happy to make correct sentences! ありがとうございました:)
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