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19 January
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Could anyone check my journal entry?
I went to the mall with my daughter. She walked a lot. She was talked to by some people walking in there “she is so cute!”, but she was shy and hide behind me.
Could anyone check my journal entry?
I went to the mall with my daughter. She walked a lot. She was talked to by some people walking in there “she is so cute!”, but she was shy and hide behind me.
I went to the mall with my daughter. She walked a lot. She was talked to by some people walking in there “she is so cute!”, but she was shy and hide behind me.
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“I went to the mall with my daughter. She walked a lot. Some people tried to talk to her and said, “she is so cute!” But she was shy and hid behind me.” Is more natural but yours is still understandable
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“I went to the mall with my daughter. She walked a lot. Some people tried to talk to her and said, “she is so cute!” But she was shy and hid behind me.” Is more natural but yours is still understandable
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